Wednesday, September 2, 2015
The lonely Girl got a friend
One day there was a little girl who lived in a small cottage.Have any friends or parents, she mostly spends her entire life alone.She looked through the window and saw people waking th the village she wondered why.She was so curious that she went to go have a look too.She saw colours and shops and people gathering around the town hall.She saw a lonely girl and she wanted to be here friend but she was shy. Soon everybody started to leave so she went over to here and asked if they could be friend and she agreed so they became best friends.Now everyday she would vist here frind and now she isn't lonely.The end
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Hi Taanvi,
ReplyDeleteI like that you shared a story here in your blog! This would make a nice Storybird don't you think? If you found the right picture pack that is. Be sure to read your posts before you publish to check for punctuation errors. Can you spot any that need to be fixed? I can! I look forward to reading more of your creative writing- keep it up.
Ms W
Hi,
ReplyDeleteThat was a creative story. There is some mistakes there. Good job on this story you wrote